College Essays Need to stand out
and Make Admission Counselors' hair stand up!
Great College Essays Can Make the Difference When Trying to Stand Out Among Thousands of Applicants!
Communicating a life of experiences and a heart of gold on one sheet of paper is stressful. They take weeks to complete and include anxiety for the entire family.
Our Essay Coaches take students from brainstorming to an exceptional personal statement in only 4 sessions. You'll be amazed how quickly they stand out!
Four sessions building a strong essay can mean all the difference for the next 4 years.
A Great Personal Statement Requires a Proven Process
College application personal statements are not your typical essay. They are more a hybrid between a marketing piece and written interview. Writing a well written essay is less important than telling a great story.
You can't include every element of your life, every quality, every success. You need to choose a theme, a central message to show the reader what is unique about you. A story that delivers a message is better than a catalogue of achievements and successes.
Learn the art of storytelling and help them build a story to illustrate the themes and message you are trying to relay. You don't want to tell the reader how special you are. You need to show them. Speaking the story first - recording the audio - is an essential step in our process.
Frame the events and specifics of the story into a strong illustration of your qualities and achievements.
Focus on optimizing the flow and transitions between ideas. Make sure the reader follows you on a journey with excitement and curiosity.
Focus on word efficiency and sentence structure. The phrasing should invoke maximum impact with minimum words.
Our Essay Coach will give the essay a final read and suggest edits to make it the very best essay possible.
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